0 0 CVS 0 0 PUBDIR 3 1 N!eq alphabet take-2 OK. heavy on the bass -- filter or redo guitar 6 3 N!?+v barratry take-5 ok clean timing; maybe retake guitar? chorus vocals 1 1 N bigger take-1 ? 1 1 N!eq bugs take-1 works. "nice try" added. 2 2 can-t 4 4 N!eq cicero take-3f2 is the keeper; reduce bass to raise guitar 2 1 N!eq-+p daddys take-2 nails it -- ADD percussion (drum); even out levels? 6 3 N!= demon take-6 with flute. fix levels and ship it. 4 1 N! dream take-3 good. a few swallowed words; minor. 1 1 for-amy 2 1 N!=i+p guilty take-1a after new guitar and vocals: needs intro, percussion (drum) 2 1 N!eq+p heaven take2 ok -- could use percussion (shaker) 2 1 N jabber take-2 ok for demo; one minor flub and a short clip or two 6 1 N!~v lcm take-4 pretty good. REDO guitar to match vocals 2 1 mil-dawn 4 3 N!eq mushroom take-3 cleaner. Possible mild clipping toward the end. 4 4 N!+v net take-4 OK -- nailed it. 1 1 N paper take-1 OK for a demo; pitch control a little shaky. 3 1 N!eq pigeon take-3 OK. Ship it. Can bring guitar up after reducing bass 2 1 n rainbow take-2 has flubs; I prefer the picking style in take-1 1 1 n!? rosie take-1 is damned good. Probably useable 1 1 N! ship take-1 pretty-much nailed it. Add flute and ship it. 0 0 - silicon 5 4 N!= silk take-5 is a keeper; =fix break? 1 1 stolen 3 2 N!eq- stuck take-3 ok. fewer eq problems than most 6 2 n stuff take-4 almost makes it, but has shaky notes at the end. 4 2 N!eq+p~v teotw take-4 makes it. ADD percussion: tambourine; REDO last verse 3 1 N!eq uncle take-3 ok -- needs bass cut on guitar, as usual 3 1 N!= vampire take-2 very minor clipping OK? === add sound effects 2 1 N!eq- wannabe take-2 good. fewer eq problems than most. 4 2 N!eq world take-2b EQ bass flute, guitar. Bring up bass flute, 10% reverb